not bad
The animation is pretty good, but I really don't understand how this is anti-smoking. Are you trying to say cigarettes are living things and we're killing them? Weird..
not bad
The animation is pretty good, but I really don't understand how this is anti-smoking. Are you trying to say cigarettes are living things and we're killing them? Weird..
The cigarettes represents PEOPLE who don't smoke. The message is that smokers affect their lives too. secondary smoke.
wow
this one is even better than its predecessors... i'm amazed. great work! and kudos on the sound, the humming and sudden fratello notes give added affect (not annoying this time)
Thanks once again. I think I will make an ambient electronica album.
nice style
it was obviously suppose to be intentionally devoid of a storyline, and i like the style of lines you did for the flash. it could certainly use a bit more length on it, and the background noise got to be a little annoying, but other than that, it was quite good in my opinion. i suggest cutting out the high-pitched beeps and replace them with some sort of buzz which will keep the disorienting effect it seemed like you were going for.
Thanks, I did make it like that intentionaly, I do have more skill than that with flash. Are you talking about the high pitched noises right at the end? I'll probably make a new one again some time. Great review!
good stuff
the animation is great, but is it really that hard to think up original characters? you could have easily just made up some human-fuzzy animal mutant and gave it some random name... I guess you were going for the associative factor, hoping to get votes from the crowd that loves all things FF. unfortunately, you used the wrong creature-type for such an animation, since moogles look only vaguely similar to what you drew. However, the animation is certainly impressive, so you get a 3/5.
its not that i couldn't think of my own characters its that i've always loved mog, so i wanted to stuff with moogles ever since i played ff3. I also realize that they don't look quite right, but thats due to the fact that in my story (which is so far unexplained) each encountered a crystal shard which is what gives each of them their abilities and slightly altered them.
anywho thanks for the comments and the advice
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